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Dadummy

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Subject: HAS ANYONE EVER WROTE A POEM OR SONG?

Wed Jan 09, 2008 12:34 am

DID ANYONE HERE EVER WRITE POEMS OR SONGS I USE TO WRITE ALL THE TIME ID WRITE FOR MY FRIENDS AND FAMILY. now i dont know but maybe ill try and write one on this forum. just for you all to judge. how about it.

which would you like

TSACGIV
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Wed Jan 09, 2008 1:20 am

I LIKE VERY MUCH TO READ YOUR POEM.

hummingbird

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Subject: poem

Thu Jan 10, 2008 12:47 pm

I have written poems but the old fashioned kind .You know ,where the words Rym. I just can't get used to poems that have no ryms.I wrote one for my mother after she suffered a stroke. .I would like to hear someone else's poem too.

Dadummy

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Subject: poem

Thu Jan 10, 2008 10:40 pm

heres to all my friends on credit magic, on line
just a wish for prosperity in the new year
when i work i get a little behind
and missing you all is my biggest fear

so keep up with the writings
be all you can be this year
and when i read them remembering
that you all are still here

Dadummy

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Thu Jan 10, 2008 10:55 pm

february is approching it will be here soon
a time to tell those you love how much
hopeing for a full moon
it doesnt take words, just a gentle touch

then you have children as well
who hold all your memories
you know they love you even when they dont tell
and you pray they will be all they can be

goodnatured

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Fri Jan 11, 2008 1:08 am

Here is one for you, inspired by my work! Twisted Evil

It is eight o'clock in the morn
and my moods about to swing
People here and people there
wanting me to give them everything.

Although, I try to hold it back
my dark side will come through
as I listen to your complaining
and everything you have been through.

I try to encourage hope
but for you, my pitiful soul
you choose gloom over glory
so outback, I have dug your hole.

Go out there and bury your trouble
and when you return my friend
with a better attitude and some motivation
we can start new again.

I deal with so many people that have poor attitudes at work, I really don't know how they plan on getting a job. Attitude is the key to getting into place of employment.

Had a rough day today, LOL.

So there you go dadummy, how is that for a poem, LOL.

update

Sorry to be so mean on that one, but I had a really rough day at work yesterday. All of our jobs and services are online, most of the population that I worked with yesterday did not have any computer skills, I needed about six more hands to get the job done. I was really irritated with a co worker he did not help Twisted Evil

No one has been here yet, so I figured I should come in and explain my mean ness.
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Dadummy

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Fri Jan 11, 2008 11:07 pm

that poem was good good nature but hang in there some people just dont got it especially the underdogs who have to work in jobs that dont require high maintinance. i use to be a coalminer and back then youd never get me on a computor i didnt need it my job was blood and sweat with a lot of hard work, so give some imagination when dealing with what you think of as dumb people maybe they just never had the need. i know in todays world you almost have to have computor skills but how long were these people out of work.maybe if theres nothing for them in the system you could invite them to come back and learn a few basic computor items like how to get on and look for a job by themselves. maybe they dont want you to see how illiterate they are on the skills it could be a man thing be patient.

Dadummy

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Sat Jan 12, 2008 9:08 pm

i once was young and full of energy
a few years went by and now it hurries me to pee
i use to be able to touch my feet , now im lucky to touch my knees
i use to go out for lunch when i had money now lunch is free

the boys use to whistle and hoot when id walk by
now its laughter and give the fat lady some pie
what has life become i want to cry
when i see thier bald heads and big guts, i smile as i say hi

Dadummy

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Sat Jan 12, 2008 9:17 pm

life is musical dont you think

erb1953

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Sat Jan 12, 2008 11:54 pm

Apparently life is musical, LOL, you really get into this stuff don't you, I am glad that you are having a good time. I will try my hand at this thread.
Okay, this is harder than I thought. LOL

My old bones hurt more these days
and my shuffle sure is slow
but my heart is full of energy
It is rearing to go.

My eyes don't see as well
but my mind is still real sharp
I am an old lady
but refuse to play the part.

I hear the staff talk about me
as if I was not here
well, hell I would rather be
Some place with a little cheer.

I may be old but learn from me
for one day before you know
You will be walking in my shoes
and lose your youthful glow.

I did not chose to be here
it took me 70 years
many filled with laughter
and many filled with tears.

But each laugh was mine
and the salty tears were too
In my mind they are my memories
thats all I have of you.

Dadummy

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Mon Jan 14, 2008 12:42 am

yo very well done ill put one on tomorrow when i have time .

Dadummy

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Mon Jan 14, 2008 1:21 am

i remember the little old man down by the lake
we use to throw snowballs, and sometimes smash a window
he walked so bent over we swore it was all fake
until the day we saw him lifeless laying there in the snow
all the people gathered around hopeing it wasnt to late
lights and sirens off to where no one knows

we read in the paper an old man died from the cold
i belive he died from from being lonely and sad
some just said well hell he was very old
but i cant help feeling some where out there ,someones missing a dad.
and to them it cant be repaid by any amount of gold
just memories of everything good that they had.

anthony

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Mon Jan 14, 2008 5:30 am

I am not a poet but these poems are simply flooring me. Excellent. Can we have some more? Wow original poems...
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Tue Jan 15, 2008 1:15 am

Your words are calming my friend
and your loyalty has been ageless
Your friendship is comforting
your smile is contagious.

Our conversations are enchanting
your voice, a breathe of fresh air
Your honesty provokes me
and I truly feel you care.

May we walk as when we were children
and our joy was easily found
When we filled the room with laughter
and loved to fool around.

Let age not be our prison
for we are not dead yet
let us rise, just a little slower
before our minds make us forget,

How to be Young again!!!!!!

goodnatured

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Tue Jan 15, 2008 3:42 am

Wow dadummy and erb, you two are really getting into this aren’t you? It is a nice twist to have some original poems here. I am not feeling real poetic tonight. Have to catch up with you two on another day, great job, keep up the good work.
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